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MARK V SHELDON
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In a corporeal internship...

0 posted 2003-10-15 02:33 AM


TWENTY OR LESS…#168

Copyright 2003 by:Mark V Sheldon


Lying to my face

clutching pieces
of a heart

in despair

not understanding
love

could only go


so far


You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

© Copyright 2003 Mark V Sheldon - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2003-10-15 07:47 AM


Mark

Good to read your words.....I missed the previous but I like the message very much..
Excellent!

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2003-10-15 08:05 AM


Yes love can take us far, but sometimes not far enough.  very well done Mark.
Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-10-15 08:12 AM


ah... reality...


enjoyed...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-10-15 09:18 AM


Fantastic Mark!
You just have to know I love it!!
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-10-15 11:53 AM


I understand this short pathway.
Good to read you again, Mark.

MARK V SHELDON
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6 posted 2003-10-15 05:56 PM


Thanks, Eric -- it is what it is...

Gentle Spirit:  ...or sometimes far away...  Thank you.

Ron:  There's that "R-word" again...  (as in "Reality..." ;-> )

Thanks, Nancy -- I always appreciate your hugs.

Kacy, I think it's only a short pathway if you're traveling quickly...  but then, how does one keep track of time anyway...?  Thank you, my friend.

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-10-15 07:04 PM


Isn't it a shame we were sold the belief that love is the end all, be all?  It can only take us so far...absolutely!  

So loved your words and needed to read them tonight.

Patricia  

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