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ethier
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since 2003-05-20
Posts 6
ajax,ontario.canada

0 posted 2003-10-13 08:22 PM


Today you left me
Tonight i cried
I felt so empty
I died inside
I don't know why

You say you love me
That's a lie
I can't help feeling
This emptiness inside
I don't know why

I needed someone
To hold me at night
You weren't there
I don't know why
I don't know why

You stole my heart
Took it for a ride
You left it hanging
It's bleeding bleeding inside
I don't know why

You took my pride
Threw it away
You said goodbye
Now your flying high
The partying guy

I loved you
But you pushed me aside
For freedom for lush
And the partying stuff
Why why

Now i know
I must let go
It's tearing me inside
Goodbye goodbye my love
To the partying guy


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PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
1 posted 2003-10-13 08:25 PM


KILL HIM KILL HIM!!!! HE MUST DIE IF HE HURT YOU HE MUST DIE!!!! yea. but the poem is great!

Meg

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

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