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n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-10-12 11:17 AM

During one of my walks through the hills in eastern Montana I had another of those introspective moments, brought on by my judging a guy in a four wheeler.

It occured to me
  not so crazily...
As I wandered the hills
  somewhat lazily
A warm and windy winters' daze
  a bit hazily
A four wheeler climbin'
  really, quite easily
Tearing the peace
  leakin', probably greasily
...don't be half empty
  take life a little easier
The more I know
  I get quite a bit dizzier
The less I do
  my mind gets too much busier
Stop!,
  take life more leisurely
I wanna get it all now
  quite hastily
Life is for the living
  don't ya' think? quite tastily
In the way of growing
  or dyin' so wastily

© Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

[This message has been edited by n2dmystic (10-12-2003 11:56 AM).]

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-10-12 11:44 AM

hehe. Kinda whimsical..sort of...I like!!

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 2003-10-12 12:41 PM

Your verse speaks the tempo of life lived all to hastily... Well done, Joseph...

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2003-10-12 09:14 PM

You have mastered the way most live and so perfectly I have to say! You clearly have the way to show life at it's truth. What a write! I love this!

Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

4 posted 2003-10-12 10:28 PM

You gave me a grin with this one. I love the way you play with language, and you have to be right, too. Take things a bit slower and quieter, and you see a lot more.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

5 posted 2003-10-13 10:40 AM

thank you all. Peace

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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