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Open Poetry #29

hymn to Him

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

0 posted 2003-10-12 11:15 AM

Actually I wrote this as a kinda needle, for those who don't like rhyme.  Sometimes I can be so childish.  It turned out that I really like this. I hope it hits you right.

Wondrously entranced
  by the joy of Him
Playfully penning
  a rhyming hymn

Overwhelmed by the clamorous
  clang and din
The chatter and clatter
  in my mind of sin

Ponderously pondering
  with love and elation
Seeking to peek
  into the mind of Creation

Undone once again
  by my own hand
Shamefully slithering
  I cannot stand

Desparately desiring
  definitive Grace
Beholding His
  beauteous wondrous face

My conscience concedes
  conceit and deceit
Now I must lay
  my soul at His feet

© Copyright 2003 Joseph D. Carreno II

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

1 posted 2003-10-12 11:27 AM

This was amazing. Giving hail to our Lord, in rhyme, and on this fine Sunday. What a blessing it is!!! Very nice!

Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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