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John B
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since 2002-07-02
Posts 68
Texas, USA

0 posted 2003-10-08 11:47 PM


our karma
takes you in and leaves you to work on heart
forgiven you want something new
MIGHT!
so coming in and it's lasting forever
only if i could improvise constantly
WIT!
even if i apologize like a rash
FITS!
so shadow's running from you
so shadow's hunting or competing again
racing to enjoy you
DRIIIVE.
recession acquitted 'so help me god'
remember one by one hitting once once once
don't use this mileage in vain 'john,john,john'
cleared athens now clear your measures..
joyed by the metal on chalk's board
because i can breathe light.
our karma is might
because i can breathe light
our karma is white because
i can be height
i can fight
i will play more at love's recess now.

i will be of one command.
sometimes it's the hardest thing you can do.

© Copyright 2003 John Nathan Booker - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-10-08 11:49 PM


First off let me welcome you to Passion's.I don't think I've read you before and this was just simply WOW!!!! It said so much, with more meaning behind the words.Wonderfully done.
Crystal

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
2 posted 2003-10-12 10:58 AM


John, WELCOME!!! to Passions.  a very powerful right, and the last line I absolutely love. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
3 posted 2003-10-12 11:33 AM


Liberating isn't it!!! Playing in loves recess is what we all deserve. Embrace it and, feel it's life!
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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