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Open Poetry #29

Swept Away

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2003-10-11 06:01 AM

I felt myself get swept away,
My feet taken from beneath me,
No foundation, No higher ground,
There lay no path,
The incarcaration of a blind man,
All lamps had fallen, lost their glow,
Living redemption halted,
Delusions of grandeur were left behind,
Pure hearts diseased,
Tomorrow vanished,
Leaving an untouchable essence,
Pawing, grasping, reaching for the void,
Rediscover me,
Victim of displaced hope,
Child of silenced rage,
Hold me to a perfection,
Fear without faith,
Efficiency, sufficiency, consistancy flawed,
My weakness surveils as I fall to the floor,
Bowed my head and secured my rest,
I was swept away.

Marty Baird
Member

since 2003-09-20

Posts 90
Georgia, U.S.

1 posted 2003-10-11 06:57 AM

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2003-10-11 10:22 AM

ok, so that proves you are

human

good write! you had me wanting to grab the ground

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