I Won't Drown Again...I like that name

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Open Poetry #29

I Won't Drown Again...I like that name

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-10-10 06:28 PM

take my words,
they mean nothing to you and
let me have them back,
to string around my neck,
in pearls of wisdom
knowing that there
is much for me to learn
in this life...
still

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-10-2003 06:36 PM).]

Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

1 posted 2003-10-10 08:42 PM

"knowing that there
is much for me to learn
in this life...
still"

A lesson we should all take to heart. enjoyed your thoughts.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-11 09:23 AM

thank you Edder..just a moment of weakness here...

M

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-10-11 03:00 PM

Hi Maureen. I like this. That title
caught my eye.
Love ya, sweet lady.

Hugs

Ethel

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2003-10-11 03:16 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Maureen, I too like that name because it sounds so optimistic and has an indication of strength, sweet friend, this is wonderful, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2003-10-11 08:59 PM

Thanks Ethel and Noah..just had a mood writing exercise *s...and yes that title was based on a poet's name here.

*s
M

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

6 posted 2003-10-12 09:23 PM

to string around my neck,
in pearls of wisdom

I've never read finer lines! This is outstanding, all of it!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Kaz
Junior Member

since 2003-10-12

Posts 26

7 posted 2003-10-12 11:41 PM

Reading this poem today makes me feel a little better about something I'd said and I wished I hadn't. We do need to learn from what we say. I love the thought of taking them back as words of wisdom that we can learn from. Thank you for sharing this.

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