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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-10-07 11:37 PM



In memory of all those people who
perished at the Sari Club in Bali
on 12th October 2002

* * *

I still recall the fragrant smell
Of frangipanis in the air
In this place of friendly faces
I remember when I was there

But fun turned into tragedy
On that terrible October day
When the evil powers of terrorism
Had their wicked way

The victims were in paradise
At least that's what they thought
But the bomb erased that image
And so many lives were fought

Young Aussies having fun
Were cut down in their prime
It was so hard to imagine
Who could commit such a crime

We looked on in disbelief
As they counted up the dead
We listened silently in horror
As all their names were read

So much pain and heartache
In a world of trouble and strife
So many lives now ruined
Such a waste of human life

* * *

I felt the need to put pen to paper
and remember those who died on that
tragic day when innocent people having
fun had their lives so cruelly taken
from them.We hang our heads in sorrow
as we ask "Why?"


I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (10-08-2003 05:59 PM).]

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angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-10-07 11:40 PM


Unfortunately this is a question that will never be answered.We will always remember all those that were involved and affected in this.My thoughts and prayers remain with all.
Crystal

allamericanjoe
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2 posted 2003-10-07 11:41 PM


Very touching poem.  It's sad that these terrorists hearts are filled with nothing of beauty and life.  What a shame, that too I think is a waste of human life.  Good write!
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3 posted 2003-10-08 01:02 AM


Sue:  Nice tribute to all those whose lives were so cruelly taken in Bali.  I know you spent time there and can picture the country where this happened.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2003-10-08 08:14 PM


Hi Sue ... you have a terrific way of writing that gets to the heart and soul of the subject. It's hard to believe a whole year has passed since this tragedy.

So many tragedies in our world and they leave us feeling so empty and frightened.

Thank you for remembering and writing such touching words.

Huggles and luvs, Marti

Hear Blessings dropping their blossoms all around you.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-08 09:57 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, this is so very tragic, sweet friend, I find it horrible how anyone could think of ever committing nothing but hatred and harm on people! (wipes tears) My heart sends many angel heart hugs to all the victims, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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6 posted 2003-10-10 08:29 PM


Sue,  thanx for showing me this.  Thanx
for writing this.  And most of all,  thanx
for the kindness of your heart that so
unselfishly shares your feelings with each
of us.

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-10-11 01:46 PM


SueTang~
Such a tragedy to have to remember ... but knowing that we must~

Your piece is poignantly penned dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia
8 posted 2003-10-11 05:14 PM


Today, all around Australia we will remember all those lives lost in the Bali tragedy, a day that will be etched in our hearts forever.  Australia may be a small island compared to the rest of the world but that doesn't mean we are far enough away from the evil powers of terrorism - the Bali tragedy showed us that and brought it right to our doorstep.

Many of the people who survived with terrible burns and many of the families of the dead have made a pilgrimage to go to Bali for the one year ceremony and rememberance.  Even those people who weren't directly affected by the bombing have gone to show their support to others.

Most of all many of the Australians who have gone back are there to help support the Balinese people because they have suffered the most and continue to suffer due to the massive downturn in tourism.

"We are all angels with only one wing,
we can fly only by embracing each other"

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

[This message has been edited by Suetang (10-11-2003 05:18 PM).]

Sunshine
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9 posted 2003-10-12 06:34 PM


I remember, Sue...it was as terrible a day in Bali as the previous attack in the U.S.  We all prayed that it would stop here, and we felt helpless when we saw it happen again.  Thank you so much for your heartfelt prayer.
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2003-10-12 10:44 PM


Nice writing Sue...James
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