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Open Poetry #29

I Felt So Safe

SecretiveLife
New Member

since 2003-09-24

Posts 8

0 posted 2003-10-03 11:36 PM

I felt so safe
That day that you held me
I thought the world was great
You had my heart's key
But then I knew
We could never be
For I gave you that chance
And you threw it back at me
We were great together
For that little time
But infront of your friends
You treat me like slime
I just wanted us to be together again
But I can't take it
I love you too much
And want to quit
I loved yu then
And you didn't know it
I love you now
And try to show it
I'll even love you
When the sky falls in
For that is when
It will all begin!

Miah
Senior Member

since 2002-08-26

Posts 1062
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-10-04 12:28 PM

Very good read.

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

2 posted 2003-10-04 03:36 AM

I feel like I need to apologize to you. My ex could have written this. a very touching read for me. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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