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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-10-03 06:19 AM


My Mistress

She is the mistress of my mind
One I search and cannot find
I know that she’s upon this earth
For earth is mother to her birth.

She leaves me little gentile clues
A sky that’s filled with gorgeous hews
The emerald of a sea of gleam
The wonder of a night of dream

She tiptoes through my flowerbed
And odors me about my head
Caresses me with winds above
Whispering a song of love.

She is the siren of my art
The strings that play upon my heart
That hosts me with a ghost of spend
That never seems to ever end.

She is the mistress of my mind
Yet with these clues I still can’t find.


© Copyright 2003 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-03 06:35 AM



Hear this voice only in thy mind
shut thy eyes, that you would find
mental reach of grasp, in kind...
in search of one, thus unwind...

~*~

Close your eyes, Sy...she's right there....


Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-03 06:41 AM


Sunshine
That's when I search the most. LOL

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-10-03 06:42 AM


Lovely, and Sunshines comment was simply beautiful....

Good Morning to ya Sy, and Happy Happy Friday!

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-10-03 06:47 AM


Lee,
Top of the morning to ya sweety.

Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-10-03 07:10 AM


Beautiful Seymour

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


HopeS
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6 posted 2003-10-03 07:33 AM


As always I enjoyed , what you
expressed with loving heart
Seymour your words are a work of art !!!
Hope

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2003-10-03 07:54 AM


I know that she’s upon this earth
For earth is mother to her birth.

She leaves me little gentile clues
A sky that’s filled with gorgeous hews
The emerald of a sea of gleam
The wonder of a night of dream

She tiptoes through my flowerbed
And odors me about my head
Caresses me with winds above
Whispering a song of love.

=============================

Youre so cute...I just love this one's tender, clever wit and analogy.
Mother Earth loves having you as a suitor

How could she resist you????
WHO COULD???

" Not I" said the moth.

*winkiewinkie*
Morning sweet Sy-babes

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold."
"So dawn goes down to day ...
Nothing gold can stay."

~Frost~


Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-10-03 08:14 AM


...I'm over here, Master...

~ She's calling you. Listen with your heart and you will find her...

Angel hugs & kisses,
EA

Toerag
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9 posted 2003-10-03 08:34 AM


Not even me...Toerag, could make a "joke" out of such a wonderful piece of poetry...well done sir...
Nan
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10 posted 2003-10-03 08:39 AM


Sounds like the queen of all mistresses to me, dear Sy - This is lovely...
Enchantress
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11 posted 2003-10-03 08:52 AM


Ah, and she is the whisper in the wind..
Sounds as though you have found the perfect mistress Sy!
Come, have some tea and tell me more?!
Have a good TGIFriday!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-10-03 08:53 AM


Dark Angel
Thank you sweety.

HopeS
And thank you dear.

Jm,
As long as I have my tinkerbell.
WWRS

Earth Angel,
She lives in my heart, it's the other four senses Im worried about. LOL

Toerag
You have melted my wax. LOL Stay well

Nan,
If I could only tell her that. LOL Hugs


inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-10-03 09:00 AM


She is the mistress of my mind
Yet with these clues I still can’t find.

yes HE is that for me too, seymour

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-10-03 09:03 AM


Nancy,
Good idea, be right over.

inkedgoddess
LOL glad you agree.

Mistletoe Angel
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15 posted 2003-10-03 10:43 PM






(smiles) Nature truly has a way of celebrating all of the virtues and ideals that are pure with magic, sweet friend, this is absolutely vivid and gorgeous, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
16 posted 2003-10-03 10:51 PM



Ah...this is beautiful, my friend...
and as JM said...who could resist?

Love this, Sy...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Elizabeth Santos
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Pennsylvania
17 posted 2003-10-03 11:33 PM


Dear Sy
The mistress of your mind and heart
Is in the verse that you impart
Her beauty is without an end
She lives within your poet pen
Yes, poetry is the mistress known
To all the eyes to which you've shown
A kiss bestowed a waiting breast
A phrase that gives a sweet caress

You are the master, my friend
Liz

BluesSerenade
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18 posted 2003-10-04 12:30 PM


Dare I sigh, and Sy again!
You are one fine poet,  
a happily ever, wonder of words!

Mr. Seymour Tabin~ you can take your bows now, and all you want to!!!

Every single day you write....
I'm reading you, and I have to tell ya,
you are a master of poetic skill.

And so much more than that!

I don't mean to gush, it's the ~sea~ in me, and she's so sentimental!

*applause*

Paul Wilson
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19 posted 2003-10-04 10:30 AM


Seymour...I sure hope your search ends on the road of happiness. I always enjoy reading your poetry sir.
I see even Toerag couldn't find anything bad to say about this one. Maybe there's hope for him yet in his old age. LOL...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Seymour Tabin
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20 posted 2003-10-04 12:12 PM


Noah,
Always enjoy your relpies, thank you.

Elizabeth,
Your response could not make me happier.


BluesSerenade
You are a sweetheart. Hugs.

Paul,
You are a friend indeed. Thank you.

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