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Open Poetry #29

Spinal Curve Connect and Contrast

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2003-10-01 11:44 PM

Arch of undesire
Things I do not want
Blur hesitation
Busy complicated

He has very bad posture
Im confused by suggestion
Do not want
Break fall in two
Stare at the floor

Relax calm
This contorted pose
Hideous
Self-righteous pride

Bad habits control persuade
Given escape fallen
The lesson of the day
Ignore intangible information
Heavy and thick stop

I dont want scarred glass paint
Clean pure free beautiful
Narcissistic impurity sexually derived
Energy passion what I want is not

Tendencies guilt fed and plagued
Simply forgotten bad habits rotten
Clear my mind
What next?

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

1 posted 2003-10-01 11:46 PM

i love this. its a freakin tirade but done right

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2003-10-02 12:11 PM

Thanx for the constructive response

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-10-02 01:37 AM

(sigh) As long as they're not destructive, I believe we all need habits, even bad habits, in order to truly have character! That brings animation to life and without them there'd be no catch to the story! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I enjoy this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

n2dmystic
Member

since 2003-09-27

Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception

4 posted 2003-10-02 04:17 AM

yeah I've had that too, I think ;-} very nicely done. thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

5 posted 2003-10-02 10:25 AM

expressed well,,,,

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

6 posted 2003-10-02 12:39 PM

You guys are great. Thanx

GIS

a trickle of music from a well
let it spill and roar like hell!

{Lord knows Im a VOODOO CHILD}-JIMI

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