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CP
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0 posted 2003-10-01 05:54 PM


In the Middle

She was very excited
Middle school, she was starting
She started feeling nervous
Butterflies in her stomach
But she got on the school bus
Couldn’t wait to see her friends
When she went in to the school
She took a very deep breath
Quickly she went to the gym
Totally unfamiliar
With the strange sights before her
She quickly found her best friends
And sat by the one she could
Her best friends and she were split
The day was over quickly
It wasn’t as she thought it
It was good and she was great
She began to love that school



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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2003-10-01 06:06 PM


Wow, you are so positive. Hopefully this good feeling about school will be contageous!
Very nice job!
Love, Margherita

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
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2 posted 2003-10-01 06:12 PM




Yeah CP, being anxious and a little wary is just part of growing up.
But even as we get older, these same feelings can still be with us at times.
It is always nice though, when you realize, that you had nothing to be nervous about in the first place.

Good Luck in school!
And stay in touch with us, through your writing!

Your poems are a joy to read!

Richy

Cpat Hair
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3 posted 2003-10-01 06:15 PM


"It wasn’t as she thought it"


this is so true of most things we face..it is not as we think it to be, unless we think it to be so much that we create the reality of it being what we thought it would..

glad that day went well..and hope the days to follow are just as pleasant a surprise!



Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-10-01 07:39 PM


"it was good and she was great..."

What an awesome year you're planning!
It's all in attitude...
and yours is wonderful!

CP
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since 2003-09-28
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5 posted 2003-10-01 07:58 PM


Thanks everyone...middle school is great.

Chelsea

[This message has been edited by CP (10-01-2003 08:01 PM).]

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
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6 posted 2003-10-01 08:13 PM


Way to go, kiddo!  I know it is going to be a wonderful school year for you.  Now, aren't you glad I am not at your school this year? You've got this year and one more, then you are at the high school with me.  (a little devil grin).  And I will see to it you stay in those honors courses!!!

Love you,
Mom

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