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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-09-30 07:08 AM




More than trunk and leaves.

Tall tree standing silently.

A sanctuary.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-09-30 07:20 AM


yes,  nice in it's brevity.     Made me wish for more.      Larry

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2 posted 2003-09-30 07:28 AM


thanks Larry

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3 posted 2003-09-30 07:34 AM


yes.. nicely done...

sanctuary they are...

enjoyed!

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4 posted 2003-09-30 07:40 AM


Thanks, Ron! I am lucky to have a huge tree outside my window, and it seems to be home to several song birds.
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5 posted 2003-09-30 08:15 AM


sancuary and majestic angels, rising to the heavens...

Made me think of the great and beautiful forests on the East Coast.  What a lovely time of year out here (South Eastern PA)for long drive up North to a quiet bed and breakfast, a good book, and a lovely walk in the woods.  Hmmmmmm, see what you've done, gave me something to think about doing.  Thanks, and have a wonderful day.

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6 posted 2003-10-01 09:53 AM


Kacy, you know, especially after it rains
I look to the tree and am left in such awe of her beauty
She gives to everyone
yet asks nothing in return but
a bit of sun and rain
Just like someone I know
*smile*
xxoo

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7 posted 2003-10-01 10:26 AM


Now you made me look up Zenku, and I found some interesting information...

you're a sneaky wench, you are...

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8 posted 2003-10-01 10:36 AM



Kacy? Sometimes *blush*, I see them as firewood futures...
But yes, Sanctuary!

Nice one!

Ed

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9 posted 2003-10-01 11:07 AM


Beautiful.
Eric

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10 posted 2003-10-01 11:46 AM


Thanks to all !

Karilea, LOL at your comment.
Actually, my version is a combo of Zen and Haiku, my own little playword that triggers my imagination. But I do know about that Karate stance.

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