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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-09-24 06:08 PM




Canova - Adonis & Venus


Ardor


I play the tunes
of love over your skin
and - suspended
in the ache for you -
I wait for your song
to break the silence.

When all my words
have been carved
on the white marble
of my delight,
the sacred gates
of our bodies
open wide.

Our one song springs
from this flood of passion,
rising from the depth
of our heavenly roots.

Our skies are tinged
in the radiant colors
of our secret ardor
and our song of love
echoes throughout
forever.

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-09-24 06:11 PM


oh my this took my breath away it's just so beautiful,,,

                                               

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-09-24 06:15 PM


Beautiful!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-09-24 06:16 PM


This is most definetly so beautiful and the picture goes with it wonderfully.
Crystal

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4 posted 2003-09-24 07:58 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I just love seeing you're happy and I wish for the colors of love to forever vividly paint your heart with smiles, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-09-24 09:41 PM


breathtaking as always Margherita
che passione

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6 posted 2003-09-24 09:43 PM



My dear...the point of the poem
is decidely intricate with the
photo...it is more than a mix...

it is truth.

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7 posted 2003-09-24 10:38 PM


Lovely!


Ed

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8 posted 2003-09-24 11:04 PM


Margherita, this is beyond beautiful.
It's just awesome!!  
Hugs  
Ethel

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9 posted 2003-09-24 11:10 PM


Pure perfection!
Margherita
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10 posted 2003-09-25 06:30 AM


Thank you dear friends and poets for reading and appreciating.
Love to all, Margherita

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11 posted 2003-10-08 09:58 AM


Margherita~
My goodness, sweet lady, this is STUNNING~
How beautifully matched are your poetic thoughts to the graphic~
Lovely - lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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12 posted 2003-10-08 10:04 AM


What a wonderful piece to rad this morning. Bravo! This is simply perfect!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-10-08 07:48 PM


Luscious...James
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14 posted 2003-10-08 08:27 PM


Just beautiful!!
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15 posted 2003-10-08 08:33 PM


Beautiful Margherita.

:-)

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16 posted 2003-10-08 08:42 PM


it is quite beautiful indeed
BluesSerenade
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17 posted 2003-10-10 11:39 AM


This is such a lovely poetic carving of words.

Just beautiful Margherita~

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18 posted 2003-10-10 11:42 AM


Oh, Margherita! That was spell-binding!


Linda

Margherita
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19 posted 2003-10-11 04:57 AM


A hug to all of you my dear friends. Your replies are an encouragement!
Thank you all.
Love and happy week-end to all!
Margherita

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