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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Bewitchment The valley of illusions charm Cries the essence of its balm Emigrating to and fro In the tender of the sew Saturating fields of green Adding luster to the scene Changing skies from gray to blue Making colored rainbows too Brewing things of tender touch Things you would to feel so much Making phantoms fantasy A little touch of ecstasy Music of a field of seems The softness of a lover’s dreams The magic of a morning’s dew The glory of it’s lighting new It makes all this and much, much more There is bewitched behind the door. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
seams like we're once again thinking along the same thoroughfare this morning my friend. And this is most exclusive, this sacred union... Good good morning and how are you doing today? Raining here, as if we need it, hehehehhe....flooding perhaps, but hey, we can handle anthing with this kind of faith wouldn't you say....oh life and sweet sweet love, how tender, how complete... Your words are overflowing with happiness and understanding, thank you for sharing and many prayers sent along to the union of you and Isabel....Have a great day!!!! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Does that mean it'll be raining on Cape Cod soon?? That'd work...  I love your bewitching verse, my dear Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Not raining here and your reply was a delight to read.  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan Good morning love are we ready for a new day? I'll start you off with a  and |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The valley of illusions charm Cries the essence of its balm Emigrating to and fro In the tender of the sew Saturating fields of green Adding luster to the scene Changing skies from gray to blue Making colored rainbows too ========================== That first verse is worth its weight in poetic gold...ahhh I do so love when poet and painter work as one and paint our scene with rhyme scheme dreams. Your subtle imagery reads like a sunrise Sybabes... As always you enlighten us with your verse of wisdom and vision.  "If you feel heartbreak, distant thunder, lightning, earthquakes ... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...In the tender of the sew ...Making colored rainbows too ...A little touch of ecstasy ...The glory of it’s lighting new ~*~ and this is Sy, and Randy, too...  Loving your muse this morning, Sy... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning dear Sy! Absolutely glorious day to match your perfect write! Tea's just about ready.. Gosh I love this piece!! ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Bewitching write Sy...much enjoyed this morning.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Brewing things of tender touch Things you would to feel so much Making phantoms fantasy A little touch of ecstasy Music of a field of seems The softness of a lover’s dreams The magic of a morning’s dew The glory of it’s lighting new It makes all this and much, much more There is bewitched behind the door. What beautiful gifts of rhyme you have given us today, Seymour. You are beautiful, my friend. Heart hugs to you  Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Your replies are worth its weight in gold. WWRS Sunshine And as always I lobe your answers. Hugs Nancy, So glad you like this piece. Be right there for tea. scorpio, Thank you so much for the read and reply. Ethel Hugs back sweet thing. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Seymour my friend, this is quickly going into my library! Wonderful write...the sky is blue...sun is bright..God's in His heaven and all's right with the world. Thankyou for this. Apple spice muffins with tea? hugs, ChrisLet your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Chris, You are a delight. vandana Thank you dear. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this is so beautiful Sy, "Music of a field of seems The softness of a lover’s dreams The magic of a morning’s dew The glory of it’s lighting new" smiling M |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy...This is painted with a bursh full of good day. |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Sitting here with my tea and toast with fresh homemade Pumpkin Butter on the toast. This is a beauty to help feed my discerning palette. Bon-Bon  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Thank you sweet. Martie And a brush full to you. Bon-Bon Don't think I ever had pumpkin Butter. THank you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Adding luster to the scene Changing skies from gray to blue Making colored rainbows too Do you know this is what you do with your poems? *S* Beautiful work, my friend... keep bewitching us with your magic. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
suthern, Your replies are always a pleasure to read. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"The valley of illusions charm Cries the essence of its balm Emigrating to and fro In the tender of the sew Saturating fields of green Adding luster to the scene Changing skies from gray to blue Making colored rainbows too" Sy...I do love how you can pen a painting in words. Beautiful, as always, poet sir...love this. When the power of love overcomes the |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
vlraynes Once again, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Just beautiful Sy - I wish we would get some of that rain here (and living in Vancouver, bet you never thougth you would hear me say that did you?  ) Have a lovely Fall you two! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
excellent writing sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sharon Hello sweety, so nice of you to read and comment. Been geting your mail and am happy your son is well and recovering. Aenimal, Thank you for the read. |
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