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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-09-24 05:58 PM





Missing,
    you

Missing...your words.
Missing the heart, the soul,
the breath of you. Your black Cadillac
at a Friendly's parking lot...missing
the car, missing you. No one
to laugh with, no one to share
my innermost secrets with.

Miss you,
     need you

Miss walking step in step, hand
in hand. Missing your arms wrapped
tightly around me. Miss you...cry out
for you. My heart beats a steady rhythm,
a steady song...missing your touch,
missing your smile, missing your easy
manner. You hold my heart inside
your heart. Miss your essence, miss
your nearness. Mostly, I just...

miss you,
    miss you,
        miss you


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SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
1 posted 2003-09-24 06:03 PM


Not a fun place to be. Here's hoping a speedy healing for your heart.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-09-24 06:07 PM


May you soon feel fulfilled and happy again.
Crystal

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
3 posted 2003-09-24 06:21 PM


The song of longing ... deeply felt!
Love, Margherita

Gemini
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since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203
Wisconsin, USA
4 posted 2003-09-24 07:11 PM


Very touching, been there.  Nice write.
vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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5 posted 2003-09-24 07:19 PM


nice read
Mordecai's Mommy
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since 2003-09-24
Posts 12
San Miguel, Ca
6 posted 2003-09-24 07:27 PM


Your writing could be taken so many ways. Sorry for your loss, for I have been there too. Good luck in healing...
Mordecai's Mommy

Like a dove, I am now flying free

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