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Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

0 posted 2003-08-24 02:27 PM


do you remember
that incredibly
awkward
moment we had
on
the elevator
that day?

well
um
nice  

hat

these are my shoes
and I'm just
going to
look at
them

forever

but just
for the record

how sick
would one have to be
to get you
to bring some
of that goo
for
breakfast?

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-08-24 02:30 PM


ROTFL.
Flummoxed, again, heh?
Love your sense of humor.

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-08-24 02:39 PM



...possibly not more
than lovesick, Reb.

Don't you agree?

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-08-24 03:52 PM


LMAO . . . LOOK UP!
HURRY!
xxoo

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2003-08-24 04:11 PM


You have a sick sense of humor!--I like that!


EA

serenity blaze
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5 posted 2003-08-24 04:31 PM


*wince*

OH Reb...do be careful what you wish for!!!

(and you call ME a nut!)


Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
6 posted 2003-08-24 06:50 PM


And I read this with my children present.  LOL.  Glad they are watching television!

You are something else!

Patricia

Local Rebel
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7 posted 2003-08-25 12:00 PM


Patricia ?  thanks for the read -- glad you enjoyed.. but, I'm trying to see what isn't kid friendly here?  help me?
mail it to me if you don't want to post it... please... I thought this was pretty G rated..

blaze starr -- not wishing nut... just musing over what the probable outcome of the suggested 'sequel' would be -- which, is why -- there is no sequel...

EA -- I do... yep... thanks..

Littlewink -- Oh Behave!  

Sunshine.. hmmmm... dunno... possibly not -- but probably from someone a little less complicated than moi..

Kac -- yep -- what I didn't put in that other pome was that big lump right in my throat -- flummoxed -- and you guys thought I was smooth... heh

thanks all

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