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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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If I were to sigh heavily enough, would the carbon dioxide color you gray and torrential would you then gather yourself up and over me that I might reach up to your underbelly, a slender finger along your cumulonimbus, poking holes that one of us may find relief? |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea This puts a whole new slant on a rain cloud...loved it! Send him this way.  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sunshine - lovely words and thoughts you write... BC |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
"that I might reach up to your underbelly, a slender finger along your cumulonimbus, poking holes that one of us may find relief?" i have no idea what a cumulonimbus is. images swell and descend slowly melding to innocence and evil  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice thoughts  |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I first checked the on-line dictionary to see if there was any other type of definition for cumulonimbus, but there wasn't It seems to me that these words support and desire the need for a severe rain shower to occur in order to provide relief to either the built-up pressure in the cloud or to the person below on which the rain would fall. Enjoyed! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I have never quite looked at it this way before.. But, with today's heat and humidity.. I can't wait to see the underbelly of a cloud! Good stuff me friend. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Whew! I agree with my sister, Enchantress, let it "pour." Great write dear one. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Ahhh yes....Let it POUR! Love the way your words POUR over me Sunshinygirl.  cumulus: cloud formation of rounded masses heaped up on a flat base. This is a  Maree fate is not just whose cooking smells good but which way the wind blows (Ani DiFranco) [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (08-21-2003 05:32 PM).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
just checking the library box ooops |
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