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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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dots and dashes and double ii's see how they run off with good intentions, mistaken identity, starcrossed mail, return to sender never came dead letters that sink, beneath a questioning heart, fluttering in bottled messages that babyblues never saw, misunderstandings, ramblings never heard, the gypsies told me never to love an aries boy, crackerjack advice, i fall back into traps anyhow, weavings, webs of words, couldn't you just intuit that the butterfly brushing your shoulder was little old me? sweep the sky, look before you and watch them flourish in the green of july, they come full circle, winter weathered they lock arms now, and become covered bridges, they embrace again and forget the bonechilling cold that kept them apart, tangled, entwined, they keep warm beneath, they know, they just do, without being analyized, trivialized, scrutinized, by windowless eyes, tho they will catch catasrophies again from a stonecold sky, do you think that can defeat them? they keep the faith do you? or do you just see them as pieces of wood, for whom do you think they endure such anguish? |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I always enjoy reading your writes.You provoke lots of thoughts from my mind. angelblueyes |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
for each other Michele . . . for each other they keep their strength Beautiful xxoo |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michele - you just keep getting better and better. I like mail... BC |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific penning,,, |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
breathe . . . |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Interesting questions posed? Got me thinking! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Great writing, as usual. Jason |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Butterflies and gypsy winds .... ... aren't they a pair!  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
the gypsies told me never to love an aries boy, crackerjack advice, i fall back into traps anyhow, Uh huh...  that just stuck out for me...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have such a charming smile ... of course every aries boy will melt (and not only aries!!)... but then you unveil true power of personality in your great poems. Fantastic combination, poetess. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You writing is so powerful, with a sense of humor that makes me want to cry and laugh out loud all at the same time. I hope you are ok girlie~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hi Michele. I enjoyed reading this poem, just as I enjoy all of your work. You have lots opf talent, Lady.  Hugs  Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank u angel...... sue,,,yes you see so much bill, and mail you get......go looksie why thank you Q and suzieQ, thanks for letting me out of the bottle to breathe again thank u j for stopping in yes, craigster,,,like sonny and cher o i meant sunny and share and bboy.....i could smell the wood burning from overhere ceinwyne...so much in a box of those little crackerjacks, i know marguerite.......you are so kind, thank u lorigril,,,,,,,im okay , you're okay, what is our alternative? ethel......thanks thats a really nice compliment and it means a lot to me [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (08-11-2003 04:55 PM).] |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
and bboy.....i could smell the wood burning from overhere I didnt know it was so obvious! |
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