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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Holding pink the colour you loved on me ~baby book~ memory of love at first sight of a different kind Four year old tears cried when words read to innocent ears ~Thankyou for coming to live with us~ I am sure, I knew then we have met in lifetimes before Were I gift to you, or you to me ? Embrace soothes this soul, yours only without you, I die, mother yet parted when we shall be I will have the world for you are mine, and I am yours in this lifetime, and the next. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Beautiful to read.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
As a mother,--heck, as a human being!!!--I was very moved by this loving, gentle, tender, beautiful, exquisite poem of the love and devotion that you and your mom have for one another. A very special mother--and a very special daughter!  Loves & Hugs, LL |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Sey, Linda You would love her, people can't help but do so. Having her, makes me put my sadness into perspective, i have HER! I couldn't ever say enough to describe she is love, unconditional. Thanks for reading.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is real, Gem.. Beautiful, and it touches the heart. This is what I wanted to see. Everyone that's done this has done so well. You hit the nail on the head, also.. Gave me goosebumps, as I recalled my own babybook.. I want to go hug my mother now. *giggles* Lovely job!  |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Beautiful! Susan |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
gemma? This is the most beautiful thing you have ever written that I have seen . . . met well by far . . . Were I gift to you, or you to me ? BOTH and for a reason xxoo |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Gem, how are you doing? Hope all is well with you...this was lovely...and I so like the ending...which is not an ending atalll...but a beginning of the next moment...smiles and hugs... |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is beautiful and tender in every way.Your mother and you both share the same exquisite essence of the heart and soul. Crystal |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
sometimes I wish I could be as loving and personal as you. but as it is, I don't like people. but reading this makes me want a hug. I need a hug Gem! insanity is not a crime |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So beautiful...cherish your time with her. (looks as though you already do. *S*) Love this..popping it into my library. ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
very fortunate...makes me think of my mum..and my step mum and the mum I've never had and prolly never will...it's okie I'm a big girl now I think I can cope but this was beautiful...very much so... If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Aww, Gemma, this is so sweet and beautiful. No wonder you are so sweet...you have a Mother who adores you and you adore her right back. It's a very good thing to be loved unconditionally, isn't it?  Hugs  Ethel |
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