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One Day |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
One day will never come. A moment bleeding to the edge of just another moment - This is all we have. And what lies beyond the final wounded moment...belongs to other worlds. From that point on...time will bleed no more. And the one day that we have always longed for - Still has never come. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I like the message you put forth in this.Take each day as the one day to fulfill all your dreams and desires.Then one day will come every day  Crystal |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful write Eric...with a hint of longing. Well done... ~Hugs~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
lovely words, Eric... ~Tier |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"And the one day that we have always longed for - Still has never come." ~ That may be true; however, you will then have new vistas--new horizons--new dreams!   Linda |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
And the one day that we have always longed for - Still has never come. Oh Eric...what wisdom I have found in this piece. I love your philosophy, my friend. Such sensibility and logic wrapped in smooth and flow. A wonderful write! Patricia |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Eric, how sad this is. But it is true that each day may be the day..if we can only see it. Sandra |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I just love how you have worded this...it's familiar and intriguing. I've read it over and over and now I'm going to save it. ~K~ |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Almost cynical through one perspective, but I prefer to view it as realistic. Wise words, indeed. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How do you do this? Stay on top of the edge? Just like this? |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Love it |
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