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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2003-08-20 07:46 AM



As I look to the heavens for answers,

Darkness looms above me.

Cold, Brutal and unforgiving the air does turn,

My bravery begins to flee.

All I seek is reason.

While mother nature charges me with treason.

Scratching my head in bewilderment,

I retreat under a white flag.

Oil fields relocated,

Marked under first class swag.

Reflections of hope distorted, contorted and exported.

Reality bites.


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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-08-20 10:16 PM


interesting read,,,
angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
2 posted 2003-08-20 11:41 PM


I hear you in this.
Crystal

the_loner_23
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since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-08-20 11:43 PM


Reality does bite. I do agree. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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