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Leaning against tree . . . . . . . . (Senryu)
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Leaning against tree . . . . . . . . (Senryu) |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light 
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+*+*+ Leaning against tree, By the side of rushing stream, Two hawks circling high. Spirit messengers, No longer flying solo, As are you and I. +*+*+ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
simply beautiful...through your words, I was right there with you...lovely and comforting...beautiful...spiritually gripping. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah..but they do fly alone..only in the comapny of anothers air space coming closer to theirs than might otherwise be the case... an interesting piece..and thought provoking... do we fly solo always? or is it the shared spaces that add meaning? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Absolutely beautiful, sweet Linda.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Lee ~ I appreciate your resounding reply!  Loves 'n smiles, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Captain ~ --and thank you for your "thought-provoking" response! EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ethel Mae ~ Thank you, Dear Beauteous Rose! Huggums, Linda Lou |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Since the hawks showed up last year in such numbers, I've learned that a hawk loves company. As do we, as do we. Witness the website. Well written, and full of meaning. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lovely picture you've painted here, Linda. Love these. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Pilgrimage ~ We were leaning against a tree alongside of the river and looked up to discover two hawks circling directly above us. It was a magical moment! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Vicky ~ Thank you! My pen is my paint brush and my paint brush is my pen! Huggums, Linda |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Linda, this is so beautiful, sweet friend, this made me shed a tear because I long to be loved like this and have a special girl beside me so I can hold her hand and make her believe she couldn't feel any more special and loved! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
neat |
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minoune Member
since 2003-08-10
Posts 87Canada |
free as free can be... two soaring hearts in a forever sky.... *sigh*.... very nice poem.. minoune |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Noah ~ --and she will be a very fortunate young woman! Keep your loving hand open and one day, when you least expect it, she will slip her hand into yours... Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
passing shadows ~ Donka shoon! lol That's my own take on the German way of saying, "Thank you!" Have a great day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
minoune ~ Hi! Welcome to Passions! Glad to make your acquaintance! "two soaring hearts in a forever sky"--I like that! Very romantically stated! If your poetry is anything like your reply, I'm going to love your poetry! Thank you for the "very nice" reply! Warm, welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
This was very lovely with a picture painted by the words, very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing. Sincerely Rick |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rick ~ Hi, Rick! I'm pleased that I was able to convey the experience to you! Linda |
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