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Nan
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0 posted 2003-08-16 11:00 PM


    
I'm reeeally sick! I hab an awfoo code -
I don' feel good doe madder what I do.
I deed tsum soup and a stupfed bear to hode.
Oh doe.. Here cubs a great bid sneedze... ah-CHOO!

I'm reeeally sick! I'm stnupfly and I'm blue
I deed a great bid box ob titsues, pleadze -
Here cubs another, AH-ah-AH-ah-CHOO!!
I'b sorry folks, I din'nt mean to sneedze.

But I can'd breedthe - I cough an' then I wheedze.
Rebembering what mommy always said,
"Stay cubbered and drindk tea so you don' freedze."
If you'd escuze me pleadze, I'm goind back to bed.

Who-ebber gabe dis awfoo code to me.
Pleadze take it back - Now where idz my blankey???



It's not my fault - Vicky sneedzed on me - /pip/Forum81/HTML/001022.html -  and before I knew it this old Spenserian Sonnet happened - again...



[This message has been edited by Nan (08-17-2003 08:12 AM).]

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-08-16 11:07 PM


A Spenserian Sonnet, you say? You're a great teacher! You entertain and teach at the same time!


EA

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2 posted 2003-08-16 11:07 PM


very cute and a terrific read,,,,

     


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3 posted 2003-08-16 11:22 PM


You always make learning fun Nan!
This is adorable!!
Thanks for the smiles..and the lesson.
~HUgs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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4 posted 2003-08-16 11:52 PM


So funny, and so cute you are all wrapped up in your blanky!!!  

That reminds me, I need to go cuddle with mine!!!  

I've heard it said, that your heart skips a beat when you sneeze~~

God Bless you Nan~  This was so fun to read!

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5 posted 2003-08-16 11:55 PM


This is so funny and cute. Makes me want to sleep with my teddy bear tonight. LOL

Cold hands means a warm heart

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6 posted 2003-08-17 12:05 PM


Go figure, I just thought you were in front of that air-conditioner, never thought you could catch a cyber cold.  Brother, do you make these poetry things up or what? A what sonnet dog goneit Nan, you make poetry hard.   This was priceless, and probably perfect too.
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7 posted 2003-08-17 08:17 AM


Well thankya, kind folks...

EA - Thanks - The way I see it, it should be fun... or why bother, ya know?

QJQ - Thankya... Nice smile, BTW

Nance - Merci... Fun is good

Blues - Thankya kind lady - I'll share mine as long as you don't mind if it's catchy...

Loner - Thanks - and yes, hug a bear today...

Mysteria - Thank you (that's trochaic)... Repeat after me... "da-DUM"


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8 posted 2003-08-17 08:52 PM


This is so cute, Nan!
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9 posted 2003-08-17 09:01 PM




(giggles in delight) Uh oh, I'm starting to feel funny too, could it be I'm coming down with this virus too? (kiss on cheek) This is sooooooo cute, sweet friend, darn you, now you're getting me sick with poetic insoiration, hehehe, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Nan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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