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vlraynes
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0 posted 2003-08-16 10:02 PM




Nothing To Sneeze At

I think I'm allergic to writing
Sounds silly but it's true
I started to write this poem
but before I could finish...ah..ah...choo!

I suddenly started sneezing
And not just one or two
I'm having an all out sneezing fit
and it's driving me...ah...ah...choo!

Crazy as it sounds, my friends
I'm unable to subdue
This strange allergic reaction
To penning a poem for...ah...ah...choo!

You probably don't believe me
And that leaves me feeling blue
Now I must go find a tissue
So, I bid you all...ah...ah...choo!...adieu

~vlraynes


Reposted for a smile...


"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (08-16-2003 10:03 PM).]

© Copyright 2003 Vicky L. Raynes - All Rights Reserved
NewEnglandlazurlu
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1 posted 2003-08-16 10:09 PM


Gazuntite ... have no clue how to spell that word. So, how about, bless you, bless you, bless you ... .

Not only a smile, but a giggle.

Loved this a whole lot and thanks again for the giggles.  Hugs, Marti

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2 posted 2003-08-16 10:13 PM


Vicky, bless your heart!  Very cute, and I have yawning fits, that won't do away.  This was a delight, and so are you.
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-08-16 10:24 PM


Well, my Dear Ms. Vicky, I'm always up for things to make me smile!--and I'm glad that I clicked on this fun write! --While it may have been fun to read!--I doubt that your hands-on research was as delightful!

~ Sending you lots healing green light!--and a box of tissues until the healing kicks in! lol


Linda

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4 posted 2003-08-16 11:14 PM


gee vicky ya" had rain to wash away all the sneezy things,,

anyhow a very cute write and read,, i enjoyied very much,,

it's finally it's cooled down some up here it's been 100 high lately,,

     


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5 posted 2003-08-16 11:20 PM


Ah so cute Vicky!
Thanks for the smiles tonight!
~Summertime Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Patricia
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6 posted 2003-08-17 12:00 PM


God bless you, Poetess Vicky.  I love this. Smiling quite large!

Patricia

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7 posted 2003-08-17 12:01 PM


LOL I can't stop laughing. i love it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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8 posted 2003-08-17 01:13 AM


oh yes this is classic. very much enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-08-17 08:11 AM


...Yikes - Is this contagious???...

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10 posted 2003-08-17 08:53 AM


LOL...so cute, Vicky, I'm glad you reposted it.  We had a teacher - 7th grade...we would start to count her sneezes because she never had just one, or two...

if we got past counting ten, we would collectively hold our breath...

eleven,

twelve,

thirteen!

And it wasn't even flu season!!!

Bonnie j
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11 posted 2003-08-17 10:57 AM


Hee-Hee Same thing happens when I go to work. I'm alergic to work.
Bon

Martie
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12 posted 2003-08-17 11:18 AM


Vicky...You're so cute!
Susan Caldwell
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13 posted 2003-08-17 11:27 AM


Very cute Vicky!  Thanks for the laugh!

Susan

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14 posted 2003-08-17 12:08 PM


I'll be sending you a box of Benedryl over night. There is no reason for anyone who can write this well to have to suffer with her allergies.
Great job.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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15 posted 2003-08-17 07:03 PM


lol.... adis souhait! (Did I spell that wrong?)

Kielo

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16 posted 2003-08-17 08:38 PM




(giggles in delight) Oh Vicky, I believe you! (kiss on cheek) Because while I have no other allergies. I have the worst one of all: art allergy! (giggles) This is so cute and made my heart smile, sweet friend, yay, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SmartChick
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17 posted 2003-08-17 08:55 PM


Thank you for the smile, Vicky! This is really cute.
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18 posted 2003-08-23 10:21 AM


Hi Vicky  
I sure don't know how I missed this alergic
reaction....I usually find all of them. LOL

You know that I like this poem. Like I told you,
you can write any form poem about any subject.  
Hugs, my friend  
Ethel

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