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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-16 07:01 AM

Will You

Some will,
some won't,
some do,
some don't.

Will you
give me
hope?

JamesLee
August15
2003

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2003-08-16 10:53 AM

If she doesn't know of all the others ... she might give you some hope!
Smiling here.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2003-08-16 10:58 AM

JamesMichael~
You touch this so tenderly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

MoniDaPoet
Member

since 2003-08-14

Posts 73
California, USA

3 posted 2003-08-16 12:57 PM

Ah, if only more men would ask the same questions instead of assuming. Great write, James!

I have only my genius to declare!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-08-16 01:26 PM

H O P E

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

5 posted 2003-08-16 02:37 PM

james,
nice poem. gives me hope
take care
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2003-08-16 05:03 PM

Thank you Margherita, Marge, Moni, indedgoddess and Aimster for the nice responses...
Margherita those others are friends...and I am not married, engaged, or steady, although I might be in the near future, something is in the works.
I got the idea for this after reading a passage in the book "Love" by Stendhal.
Incidentally, a man that had been very frustrated by the pursuit of love.
"From time immemorial there have been four different degrees of love:
The first consists in the giving of hope.
The second in the offering of a kiss.
The third in the enjoyment of the most intimate embraces.
The fourth in the granting of the whole person."
James

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (08-16-2003 05:04 PM).]

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