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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-08-13 06:15 PM

To See

Once I
lost a love.
Taken aback,
I wanted
her back.
She refused to
return to me.
In a season
my eyes were
opened to see.
Why should I
want a woman
that doesn't
want me?

JamesLee
August14
2003

eminor_angel
Member

since 2003-05-22

Posts 323
Canada

1 posted 2003-08-13 06:50 PM

brilliant in its brevity. I like.
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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-08-13 07:27 PM

thats how it goes james, dontu know that.......once you have her, the chase is over

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-08-14 05:04 AM

Thank you eminor and inked...
Inkedgoddess you must be right...some women don't want to stick around they just want to share a few dances...then off for some new adventures...I'm like that myself sometimes...James

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-08-14 09:19 AM

Michele is right!! Once they have you they start wondering what else there is..grrrrrrr

James~The writing is very well done and true..find someone that wants you...love and happiness should not be a struggle!

Kiss~
Susan

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2003-08-15 10:38 AM

Now, if only everybody could think this straight before being stubborn at times!
Love, Margherita

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

6 posted 2003-08-15 11:28 AM

..JamesMichael../\..thanks; enjoyed the poem..

../\..Spiros

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angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

7 posted 2003-08-15 03:02 PM

If she doesn't want you then she doesn't know hte joy she's missing

angelblueyes

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2003-08-15 04:29 PM

enjoyed

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

9 posted 2003-08-16 03:30 PM

Glad you came to see even if it took a season. Smart man.

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2003-08-16 04:42 PM

Thank you Susan, Margherita, Spiros, angelblueyes, vandana and Janette for the nice responses...
Janette my thoughts changed as I grew weary of the pain...letting go is the best policy...James

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