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Open Poetry #28

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-08-14 06:42 AM

Reach

I sit silently
as this
crayon heart
melts under
rays of hope
color meant
to be satin
ending up
a puddle
it is not
too late
no lines
have been drawn
reach
dip in
and we
will join
as one
finger painted
across the sky

"I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-08-14 08:18 AM

Oh...I wish I had a flower I could hand you. *smile*

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2003-08-14 10:08 AM

will join
as one
finger painted
across the sky

Love this! hugs, Chris

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-08-14 04:33 PM

I never thought
getting my hands dirty
would feel this free.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

4 posted 2003-08-14 05:05 PM

I know what Icy means...

Is it me or does that picture just FIT the poetry??

I loved it.

Susan

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

5 posted 2003-08-14 07:14 PM

You could make an artist out of any man, IMHO. I've missed reading you.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

6 posted 2003-08-14 07:20 PM

Pretty....I can just see this, and your words make me want it.

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