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this small offering |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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just symbols that were taught to me. The moment you began to read-- they belonged to you. It wasn't I who felt the need to seek a commonality but there is wisdom in the eyes of the innocent-- a knowledge giving fire to greed-- so we teach the child to speak and place the seeds vicarious in the hopes that this one might become the things we failed to be. even this small offering. A microbe of a piece of heart DNA's unraveling and art is just simplicity that leaves some room for some to say-- "There--that line is just like me" and oh, the pulse pound rapidly at the thought of family-- kin to what we think is true. It does not matter what I mean-- |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Interesting premises postulated here... I enjoyed your offer. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Thought provoking and very strong sensations...TD |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
great write K |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I'll bleed. and you drip on the page again so brilliantly i know this well, lady |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"All that we attempt is thus-- even this small offering. A microbe of a piece of heart DNA's unraveling" Karen...this is no 'small' offering, nor is it merely a 'microbe of a piece of heart'. This IS your heart...and, even through the pain, it is beautiful. I love you, lady.  "My friends are my estate." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
With my gratitude, I thank you. and Mark? Thanks for dropping in. I know I don't reply much to your work, but it is not intended as a slight. I'm just honestly baffled by this ability you have to say so much in "twenty or less". If I may quote m'self? "and art is just simplicity that leaves some room for some to say-- "There--that line is just like me" You are a master of that. (I just thought it was time I let you know that I thought that.) Thanks again, good people. with love, I'm gonna go get a beer now. *burp*  Pardon the vulgarity? |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
smiling at you yes I see...where this may have come from but you eloquently scrape the barrel's bottom better than anyone proud of you for this needed to be said awesome comanche |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Mmmhmm.. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Hi Ser Lady..  Missing you...this place....your writing.. Drop me a hello sometime I'm back home again again Dear John, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"*from a waking comanche, to a madviking*" --Oh, now I get it!  EA |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Where on earth does this come from? I wish I could get inside your head for only an hour, that would fill me up for one year of ideas I am sure. Such pain in this one, and yet - I see a spark of hope in the awakening. Don't forget you got two apples aren't exactly falling far from that tree there. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pondering.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Karen? there is wisdom in the eyes of the innocent-- Bless you xxoo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
A wonderful write as always Love to read your poems Rogue |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Take these words--they are not mine-- just symbols that were taught to me. The moment you began to read-- they belonged to you. ======================= gawwwd I love that verse... You have an exceptional gift of turning words into poetry... that you gift them to us is the real reason for poetry.  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." LH [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (08-14-2003 02:56 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thanks all-- you are all WAY kind. And mysteria, don't know if you want a tour of my head--smile...it's kinda like a fun house--I'm STILL trying to located the exit. love to all. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Karen, And in the crimson still the eternal flame of hope. I'm with Sharon. But I'm not sure I could afford the tour.  You have no idea how happy I am that you are here sweet girl! If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
OH YOU... You just made me so happy. Please stay well, and get healthy and strong again. You have always and remain and inspiration to me. And nope, a hug won't do.  Thank you |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
but there is wisdom in the eyes of the innocent-- Yes there is. And you? you're bootiful! hugs Karen Maree  fate is not just |
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