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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Be still in me These sentient songs Closed away until love dawns Be still and on The mark to run To race the wind in heartfelt longs There be still repeatedly Inside and ever eagerly Quiet time composing so Be still in me Yet stronger flow Copyright Kkh 8/13/03 |
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eminor_angel Member
since 2003-05-22
Posts 323Canada |
"Be still in me These sentient songs" I love this line! |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
enjoyed this write very much,,, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
moving and stillness concurrently, very zenlike, i like much |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
There be still repeatedly Inside and ever eagerly Quiet time composing so Be still in me Yet stronger flow Now you know I had to love this! Wonderful, lady! Patricia |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
this advice stays with my heart...It has been given to me lately. This is beautiful in more ways than I can explain. Dear John, |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
very touching piece, I enjoyed it alot Julie "Dont cry because its over, smile because it happened. " |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
definite zen |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The quiet touch of your use of still was not too much...just enough. You've left us a lovely, positive feeling...very, very nice, Kathleen... |
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