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Ratleader
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0 posted 2003-08-10 02:31 AM



it’s a
signal that
you know

just...private

me to you
to let you
know I’m
here

know what
I think

feel what
I feel

you know it
feel it
don’t you

I mean
right now
you feel

know

don’t you



© Copyright 2003 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-08-10 02:38 AM


I have that connection with people too....good writing here Ed
Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-08-10 02:59 AM


Love this,
the style rocks.

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-08-10 09:15 AM


Yep....very nice.

Susan

angelblueyes
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4 posted 2003-08-10 09:16 AM


I liked this one.
angelblueyes

Bonnie j
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5 posted 2003-08-10 09:22 AM


Know those signals. Had a friend a long time ago.He would just nod his head in ever so slight a movement and it would set me off laughing.
Thanks for sharing.
Bon-Bon

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6 posted 2003-08-10 10:29 AM


Ed...If there is a special connection...words are not needed...and sometimes not even physical presence is necessary to be just tuned in.  Loved this little poem of meaning.
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7 posted 2003-08-10 10:31 AM


Ahhhhhhhhhhh how romantic.

Enjoyed!

always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same

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8 posted 2003-08-10 10:38 AM


So much can be communicated through so little... when hearts are connected and doing the talking. *S* This is a tender beauty... yes. *S*
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9 posted 2003-08-10 10:43 AM


I was concentrating on your wonderful poem... so I didn't realize until my response popped up that you've passed by 2000!! *S*

Congratulations, my friend... and thank you for enriching our lives so immensely over these past months with your wit, compassion, intelligence and grace... Your incredible talent is exceeded only by your big heart. *S*


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10 posted 2003-08-10 12:38 PM


This is very good work.  You illuminate something very basic in the human spirit which seldom is culturally recognized.

The sense of "knowing" has always fascinated me.

Thank you for sharing this.

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11 posted 2003-08-10 12:43 PM


Yes..there are times when you just know.
Congrats on becoming our newest Member Elite.
~Summertime Smiles, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

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12 posted 2003-08-10 12:54 PM


That's nice any very meaningful Ed~
I suspect she does know.  

I admire the simplicity in your poetry.

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