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Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

0 posted 2003-08-09 08:30 PM

Blind passionate path
    of my reclaiming
while the night collects,

    patterns of voices echo

caressing whispers
filling cracks
of winding thoughts

Faded memories of time
    wrapped in silk
to awaken in dreams of peace
    each time without regret

Like a blossom
the bud of a yearning rose
    protected from aging
to be forever yours
forever shared

Remind my lips of flavors
another instance of embrace
    I want to touch that point of reflection
between heaven and earth

Licorice skies;
gumdrop's rainbow
    sugar highs
until all eyes hang low
and the night must rest

    so we may face
each hearts delight
these dreams I will taste

    with you

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

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[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (08-09-2003 08:33 PM).]

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2003-08-09 08:56 PM

Applause both of you on this duet. Very well done.
I found this verse especially striking...very crisp in it's enchantment.
"Remind my lips of flavors
another instance of embrace
I want to touch that point of reflection
between heaven and earth"

Wonderful. TD

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

2 posted 2003-08-09 09:05 PM

I'll second that

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-08-09 09:20 PM

You two write the romance so well.
Loved this slow dance that you did,
you moved me with your combined grace.

Just beautiful!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2003-08-09 09:27 PM

Oh my! Oh Wow! Lauren and Craig..I stand and applaud you both!
This is poetic perfection in a duet..
Not knowing who wrote..what..or where..amazing!
I love it! And I'm keeping it!
~Summertime Hugs & Smiles to you both, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-08-09 11:06 PM

Oh yes...very well done to both of you!

Susan C.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

6 posted 2003-08-10 12:45 PM

Lauren and Craig, this is very beautiful. I
especially liked this part....

Licorice skies;
gumdrop's rainbow
    sugar highs
until all eyes hang low
and the night must rest

    so we may face
each hearts delight
these dreams I will taste

    with you

I hope you two will do another one?
Hugs to you both

Ethel

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

7 posted 2003-08-10 12:52 PM

my mind is screaming more..more ..

mooore..

awesome write, both of you..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-08-10 03:39 AM

awesome!

I wish I had time and patience to do a duet, but it seems impossible for me to sit down

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2003-08-10 06:58 PM

Thank you TD and Rebel,
    it was a pleasure writing with Lauren again.

      BlueS, grace? ....
            That must be Lauren, I have two left feet!
                (Thank you)

Nancy - Please, sit down, relax ....
            Thanks for the applause!

       Susan, couldn't have done it with out her!
              Many thanks!!

Ethel, Karou - Thanks ... if you look under greeneyes
               in the smart search you will find
               at least one we did awhile ago.

        Dix -  just e-mail one of us ..
                write a few lines on something
                 and see what happens!

[This message has been edited by ctowen (08-10-2003 07:00 PM).]

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

10 posted 2003-08-10 07:15 PM

your poem glows in the dark , its so good.. u two are amazing , sweet lines wow
wolf

Gabriel Frost
Member

since 2002-08-15

Posts 216
Between midnight thoughts

11 posted 2003-08-10 07:29 PM

Damn...i didnt even know this was possible. You two have a really great connection. So sublime...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

12 posted 2003-08-11 11:06 AM

thank you all.....

I do enjoy writing with craig
as he always brings his style
thanks craig..

muwwwaaahhhsss and hugssss
Lauren~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

13 posted 2003-08-12 09:39 AM

Ethel, Meg, and all else ...

Other past duets are:

Endless Wave (open 19)

Lost In A Dream (open 20)

Happy Reading!

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

14 posted 2003-08-12 09:52 AM

Sigh...oh how beautifully expressed

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

15 posted 2003-08-12 10:16 AM

The two of you are so equally matched...lovely write

hugss
M

IndigoEve
Member

since 2003-01-10

Posts 279
Etched in the illusion of time

16 posted 2003-08-12 11:42 PM

I adore this one. Great job, you two.

For saints have hands that pilgrims' hands do touch,
And palm to palm is holy palmers' kiss.--"Romeo and Juliet"

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