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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-08-09 06:42 PM



reflections of our silhouettes cast
shadows on the pond during the
harvest moon

your kisses leave me with visions
of shooting stars dancing across
the midnite sky

you always keep my mind with an
imagery of romance and loving you
was not by chance

enchanting passions with mystically
mesmerized thoughts linger deeply
within me

my love for you is eternal


     

[This message has been edited by QjQ (08-09-2003 06:43 PM).]

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-08-09 06:55 PM


well done
Local Rebel
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2 posted 2003-08-09 08:13 PM


lucky couple

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-08-09 08:20 PM


Beautiful Glenn!
Much enjoyed the read.
~Summertime hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-08-09 08:57 PM


What a nice flow and feel to this piece Q...
Happy for you, and a great read. TD

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2003-08-09 11:13 PM


"you always keep my mind with an
imagery of romance and loving you
was not by chance"

So loving!  

Very beautiful.

Susan C.

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-08-10 01:10 AM


So pretty.. Very sweetly devoted.
SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Justbleu
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7 posted 2003-08-10 01:37 AM


This one flows sweetly Glenn.....
You write love beautifully!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-08-10 02:38 AM


gosh, you ole softie romantic you
JilGirl
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9 posted 2003-08-10 05:50 AM


I agree with Dixie!

"enchanting passions with mystically
mesmerized thoughts linger deeply
within me"

Truly depicts a "romantic softy"!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

Margherita
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Eternity
10 posted 2003-08-10 10:45 AM


reflections of our silhouettes cast
shadows on the pond during the
harvest moon


Dear Glenn, this is already enough to start dreaming ....
beautiful poem.
Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-08-10 10:58 AM


enchanting passions with mystically
mesmerized thoughts linger deeply
within me

my love for you is eternal



Glenn, this is so beautiful...
the thoughts and the poem, too.
You know that this romantic loves it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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