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Open Poetry #28

Feed my Eyes

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-08-09 09:18 PM

Feed my eyes,
Tell me no lies.
Feed my soul,
Don't push me in another hole.
Feed my mind,
Making me go blind.
Feed my emotions,
Drugged me without potions.
Feed my heart,
You didn't know you had me from the start.
Feed my eyes,
Say no goodbyes.
Feed my soul,
I'm ready to do my role.
Feed my mind,
You're a one in a million find.
Feed my emotions,
Melted me like smooth lotions.
Feed my heart,
Now you know I was yours from the start.

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-08-09 11:36 PM

Snowflake From Hell - like your write, says a lot...

BC

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2003-08-10 01:09 AM

This is just awesome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2003-08-10 01:41 AM

well thank ya you two i appreciate it

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-08-10 03:24 AM

ooooo, nice

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2003-08-10 05:24 AM

I know you just wanna get fed. When I was young feed my eyes was a threat...you know ,"if you don't eat your dinner I'm going to feed it to you through your eyes" lol.
Seriously though this is a lovely poem
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2003-08-10 11:08 AM

You invoke special food and very nicely so.
Love, Margherita

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