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Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06
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0 posted 2003-08-07 06:33 PM


I took ONE step too many...
now I'm stuck in river of tar!
Ahoy, I'm floating!
Passing cross signs: "Bell" and "Lamar"

I'd gladly grab onto something
But I've no oven mitts
This lunchtime stroll from the office
is as bad as it gets!

So, allow me this simple
advice from situation dire:

"BEWARE MOLTEN BUS WAVES,
AND CARS SPLASHING FIRE!"


© Copyright 2003 Robert Frazier - All Rights Reserved
barbaraj
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since 2003-01-24
Posts 139
Nova Scotia, Canada
1 posted 2003-08-07 06:34 PM


lol...this poem really lifted my spirits after a hard day. thanks.

~bjw~

~You can make more friends in two months by becoming interested in people, than you can in two years by trying to get people interested in you.~


garysgirl
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2 posted 2003-08-08 06:02 AM


This is cute. I enjoyed
reading it, Robert.  
Hugs  
Ethel

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
3 posted 2003-08-09 01:05 AM


Cute, but metinks there is a lot of truth in your words.  

Enjoyed your creative writing, Robert~

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