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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2003-08-05 12:09 PM

                              delightful meadows
                              of dewy green grass
                                                where brooks slip, full of life,
                                                over pebbled rocks
                              dancing to rhythms of
                              warm Savannah airs
                                                and all I wish, is that
                                                you keep me there
                              to shine in shimmers
                              of dazzling rays
                                                just give me this day
                              of gliding through

                              slide next to me my friend,
                              on this eager     park bench
                                                that begs us to share the dream
                              let's enjoy this dance
                                                and the time of us
                              before the rain
                                                 comes pouring
                                                             down,
                              for moments rule this world
                                                through the pulsations
                                                of our hearts
                              and the fixations
                                                of our minds

                              while seasons, though they must change
                                                our hands would stay the moment
                                                                               before the skies turn gray

                              and in agree, we believe,
                              that nothing's lovelier
                              than nature in full swing

                              ~* duet by Sudhir and Sunshine *~

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

1 posted 2003-08-05 12:11 PM

I knew I recognized that bench... but not until the end did I know your duet partner... so your collaboration succeeded so very well! *S*

Beautiful poem... I curtsey to you both. *S*

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-08-05 12:16 PM

Bravo!!!!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-08-05 12:18 PM

--Two beautiful souls making beautiful, soul-touching music together...

Linda

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

4 posted 2003-08-05 12:38 PM

What can I say but... WONDERFUL! You two did a great job. You'll have to write some more together.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2003-08-05 12:38 PM

very very nice and dreamlike

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

6 posted 2003-08-05 01:11 PM

You got room on the bench for me?   Slide on over Sunny Owl.  I need to possess your optimism, Sudhir...Karilea. Can't we please make it a trio? This is just a taste of your wonderfuls wisdoms...I demand more.  So, slide your lil' behinds on over. Recite another one of these beauties for me!

LOVE THIS!  A keeper to be dropped in my treasure box!

Patricia

[This message has been edited by Patricia (08-05-2003 01:14 PM).]

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-08-05 01:15 PM

Sudhir and Karilea

    "slide next to me my friend,
                              on this eager     park bench
                                                that begs us to share the dream
                              let's enjoy this dance
                                                and the time of us
                              before the rain"

Lovely sharing between you, and given to us...thank you!

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

8 posted 2003-08-05 01:22 PM

very good write,,,

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

9 posted 2003-08-05 05:14 PM

Sigh Sudhi and Karilea, your poem is very beautiful and very serene. I doubt that there is any room on that there bench so I'm going to sit on my picnic blanket layed out in front of you and listen. So more please.

Maree

this is a

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-08-06 07:03 AM

Thank you Sudhir, for this delightful exchange. I knew that bench was special...as I knew the photo of it had to be shared more than once. The challenge of a duet is a marvelous thing...it truly opens our worlds!

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

11 posted 2003-08-06 07:49 AM

I do have to say thanks to you, Karilea for accompanying me on this one... it felt really great to do this duet...

And my good friends, I thank you all for your forever words of kind appreciation, your thoughts and your support as always...

Many regards to you kind people,
Sudhir

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2003-08-06 09:03 AM

Oh, my goodness! How lovely is this?!! Bravo you two and ....more please.

hugs, Chris

"The suspense is terrible.
I hope it will last!"
-Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

13 posted 2003-08-06 02:47 PM

Sudhir - wow, very nice write together, but when two of such talent write a duet, what else? Excellent writing you two...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2003-08-06 03:45 PM

Nice...James

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

15 posted 2003-08-07 07:57 AM

Thanks a lot Chris, Bill and James...

Regards
Sudhir

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