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Good-bye |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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Who am I really, Just some girl that asks for help, No one understands, No one cares when I cry, Why don’t I end it now and say good-bye. My world has spiraled and crashed, Therefore I never did get too attached, People just walk on me, Never talk to me, Asking for help isn’t such a bad thing, But when I get rejected by someone I love my heart begins to sting. Who am I really, Just some girl that asks for help, No one understands, No one cares when I cry, Why don’t I end it now and say good-bye. Who am I really, Just some girl that asks for help, No one understands, No one cares when I cry, Why don’t I end it now and say good-bye. Good-bye. |
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Poe_Pot_Pie Member
since 2003-06-01
Posts 107Canada |
What a sad peice. Sometimes,I would like to say good-bye to my life. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
It's like a very sad song, also tender in its melancholy, I feel that you hurt. No one is immune to such moments. And sadness inspires the poet greatly. After writing the feelings down, it gets better again. Love, Margherita  |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Margherita was right, it will get better again, but for now you feel the pain, and it stings. Creative souls feel that hurt more than others, as they are in tune to their passions more, I believe...share it, write it, and know that you're not alone...~S~ Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~ |
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