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Hushed echoes...
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Hushed echoes... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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I can’t forget, you hung the moon and the stars, only sparkle in my eyes when I look at you.... The horizon sings to me a lullaby, in hushed echoes and my heart, harkens in remember reverence seasons pass too soon this, I now realize and let the song, carry me though twilight is gentle and approaches, as a sonnet it’s your voice I hear reading to me, a sigh and my soul answers, I love you.... ~SEA~ |
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Christina24rb Junior Member
since 2003-07-25
Posts 13Georgia |
Very beautiful! Flows nicely...poetic! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
How beautiful! A very warm and fuzzy read...thank you for the sense of a warm fireplace...within an atmosphere of nature...simply lovely. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I can’t forget, you hung the moon and the stars, only sparkle in my eyes when I look at you.... ====================== I do so love when you write (me)  moth anthems...this is beautiful Sea-girlie... heart on sleeve stunning. Our muses seem to be on the same wavelength... (dont hold your breath waiting for mine tho) Lovely lovely poetess Susan somethings never leave us.... somethings never should.  (yes, you know)  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." LH [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (07-31-2003 10:36 AM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very nice Sea...been a long time since anyones voice has read to me... *s M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, this is beauty . . . xxoo |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
S- as always your work amazes me. you know i loved every word of this and the reasons why. it's so refreshing to read your beautiful work. take care. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
There is no mistaking it!--You are a woman in love!   EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
some things you just don't forget great stuff here Susan |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
That one went straight to the heart, then on to the library! Wonderful stuff here lady! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, isn't it wonderful when someone's heart speaks to you as if it is reading to you? You know, I know.  Some things never leave us, do they? Hugs to you, sweet lady, Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Susan..lovely as always... reads like a whisper... I admire your unique style. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very nice write Sea bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just wanted to say thank you all very much for your wonderful replies and Janet....I'm waiting.... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
SEA... This is it...this is what love feels like...thanks for reminding me. A soft and lovely write, Patricia |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - you do write from the heart. I wonder what it would be like if someone did so for me... BC |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Do you realize that you are the ONLY person who actually makes me sigh at the end of a poem (that is a good thing by the way) Oh Susan, this was delightful! |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Beautiful and descriptive writings of your heart...thank you.... Goldenrose. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ 'let the song, carry me though twilight is gentle and approaches, as a sonnet it’s your voice I hear reading to me, a sigh and my soul answers, I love you....' Now ... just how lovely is lovely ? VERY~ Beautiful lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"as a sonnet it’s your voice I hear reading to me," Reading this made me long to hear, too. Lovely write. Enjoyed |
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