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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-07-31 09:02 PM


“IN DARK OF SUMMER NIGHT”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
Desirously do you unleash the boundaries,
of your inner self in light of moonbeams,
chiffon flows with the softest of breeze,
and true becomes of my deepest dreams…

Skin is tender with your sensitive traces,
I feel chilled warmth to run up and down,
this spine dances to tingle with its delight,
soft to tempt shows itself within your gown…

Fingertips yearn running slowly through silk,
delicacies are found of you, ones to admire,
this heart beats ever faster in its passion,
as it knows of this now will never expire…

Shadows wine is sipped gently as lips touch,
all is to beckon in warmth of candlelight,
in the heavens the stars can only smile,
as we embrace in dark of summer night…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
MARK V SHELDON
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1 posted 2003-07-31 09:09 PM


Sure beats mosquitos...  A lovely word painting of vivid sensual colors, Bill.

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Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-07-31 09:11 PM


Softly sensual Bill...and very very romantic.
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-07-31 09:11 PM


in the heavens the stars can only smile,
as we embrace in dark of summer night…

and tomorrow is august already........can we keep this alive through the winter, bill, can we ever?

Ivy Rose
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4 posted 2003-07-31 10:27 PM


Bill...This is a steamy, passionate tale of love. Beautiful and romantic images throughout. You write so wonderfully about the passions within. ***Ivy Rose
angelblueyes
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5 posted 2003-08-01 12:14 PM


I am in awe of you.The talented romantic of words does it again and again.
angelblueyes

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6 posted 2003-08-01 12:24 PM


Desirously do you unleash the boundaries,
of your inner self in light of moonbeams,
chiffon flows with the softest of breeze,
and true becomes of my deepest dreams…
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loved the diction here...

Mike

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Margherita
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7 posted 2003-08-01 07:36 PM


Yes, Bill, the stars do smile, because they are part of your beautiful love scenery.

Love, Margherita

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8 posted 2003-08-01 07:45 PM


Shadows wine is sipped gently as lips touch,
all is to beckon in warmth of candlelight,
in the heavens the stars can only smile,
as we embrace in dark of summer night…
  

OMG!! This is just soooo romantic. I love it!! hugs, Chris



"The suspense is terrible.
I hope it will last!"
-Gene Wilder as Willy Wonka



    

Janette
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9 posted 2003-08-01 07:45 PM


Lovely and sensuous ... just the way I like them ... longing for some of these kind of nights myself.
S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19
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10 posted 2003-08-01 07:57 PM


"Shadows wine is sipped gently as lips touch"

Nice line, BC

Earth Angel
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11 posted 2003-08-01 08:02 PM


Bill, this is exquisitely romantic--and a I want to savor this one over and over and over again...


EA

Patricia
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12 posted 2003-08-02 12:17 PM


So soft and tender, Bill.  Your words make me melt.

Patricia    

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