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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-26 04:53 PM



encircle me
in silent prayer,
kneel
along pews of green,
taste of clover
golden stream

intoxicate me,
breathe your light on me,
walk the path
heal my sprit free,

along the field,
bequeathed by wings,
i rise in flight
delight,
warm, his kiss
purest innocence,
shielded
hushed iridescence,

watch them weave
childhood bliss,
reminiscence,
silk colored ribbons
maypole dance,
sing a tune,
a sky-eyed boy
a flowergirl of june,

long  before i learned
that LOVE would HURT,

babys breath,
sweet sigh,
protecive veil
in trance,
i dance,
AMAZING GRACE,
deliverance,

fertility dance
ring around me,
i birth them
as they deliver me,
illude me to
a charmed life
again

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-26-2003 10:58 PM).]

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-07-26 04:58 PM


Oh so beautiful and as soft as a whisper.
Very nicely penned.  

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-26 05:02 PM


You just gave birth to a beautiful butterfly!


EA

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-07-26 05:02 PM


Michele:

*smiling*
this IS a dream . . .

golden stream
intoxicate me,
breath back onto me,
walk the path
heal my spirit free,


Ask and ye shall receive
xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2003-07-26 09:22 PM


inkedgoddess - your writing is excellent, you just get better and better...

BC

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
5 posted 2003-07-26 09:30 PM


Stunning Mish, ah to dream
scorpio
Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178
right...there
6 posted 2003-07-26 10:10 PM


A very umplifting write..

believe in what your heart feels...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
7 posted 2003-07-26 11:25 PM


thank you dear nancy for stopping in

yes, ea. and this was my least painful birth of all.....after that 9 lb bigboy l7 years ago i never thought i would do it again..tis was a breeze

sue.........
*smiling*
this IS a dream ...yes, and sue once in a while i am living proof, it does happen

bill, that is sue nice of you to say, thank you dear

raffi.......thanks for those complimentary words

scorpi........yes uplifting by the butterflies today on the path


passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
8 posted 2003-07-27 03:49 AM


awesome write, beautiful ending
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
9 posted 2003-07-27 05:44 AM


Your creative mind is a very very fertile one!
Wonders!
Butterflies so light and soft as they are, they inspire powerfully.
Love and hugs. Margherita


Butterfly by Warhol

VOE
Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
10 posted 2003-07-27 06:23 AM


Beautiful images you painted on this electric canvas, and I have the urge now to close my eyes and dance with those butterflies!!! Wonderful writing....~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
11 posted 2003-07-27 08:33 PM


Nicely done from a sky eyed boy with sand in his sandals
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