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HOPE (My Own Challenge)
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HOPE (My Own Challenge) |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Alone dark tower a garden bower The throne bequest her desperate mess The bride she cries adorned in black cobwebs drown her fate in fact she whimpers softly, "It's much too late." The steed be strong! muscles taut delivering a knight one whom has fought battlescars and blood adorn his suit armor of steel and velvet boot Belfry BOOM ding - dong DOOM a wedding march she greets the groom A step of toe bought, borrowed and blue wrought iron gate resonates through This knight, a man on knee now bent into her eyes desire, intent Removes his armor to reveal one word She gasps, her hand falls from mouth she heard A beat within long since been dead locks of bun fall from thy head eyes are locked in love at last! This knight now stands It has come to pass! A single rose adorned for Thee unclasps his belt a silken rope His coat undone his armor bare upon his chest her gaze does stare For here reflected His crest doth shine stained glass deflected two eyes in time What may he bring? This interlope? Upon his chest a glint of H O P E /pip/Forum7/HTML/000573.html [This message has been edited by littlewing (07-26-2003 11:28 PM).] |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sue....you are amazing lady!! I love this!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
when I saw the topic..i was going to say something sarcastic like "there is no hope for you" but this is too good to ruin with mindless insults  haha...I'm beeing good..yasee? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I personally think this is one of your best Sue.  M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
she whimpers softly, "It's much too late." never too late and you yourself proved it in this wonderfully crafted piece...... and sue, its funny , i think i did your challenge in mine before with the butterflies, and didnt even know you had put that in the discussion forum......i very rarely go in there, it freaks me out for some reason.....isnt that weird? |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, Sue, this is just wonderful. I am keeping this! Now....I must get to work on the word you have given me. Mind melt! Mind melt!! Help!!!!!! Chris  "At one glance |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sue, I kinda like you stepping out of your box!---but I like you inside of it as well!  Really enjoyed this beauty!  Linda |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sue:This was absolutely wonderful.Hope is a great thing to have.You put me in awe again. angelblueyes |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
god sue goosebumps all the way through!!!!  Ohhhh MY GAWD! I love this!!! if you were a guy I'd well lol n/m   If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling...check your e-mail... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Well written...I enjoyed this very much.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is epic romance. NO.... no. I was wrong. This IS hope. You did good, lady. and this? "Belfry BOOM ding - dong DOOM a wedding march she greets the groom" amazing. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - I'm in amazement of how you write of your feelings so well, and thoughts within... BC |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Nancy - this was hard to do! Liz, you are/was being good and there is no hope for me - you know me well thank you Maureen, what a beautiful response thank you I am honored Michele, you are free from the challenge indeed . . . that write encompassed so many emotions alone . . . and yes, it is weird (same brain) Thank you so much Chris, thank you so so much and sorry I gave you disgust although you did an amazing job with it, I must say you did not help whatsoever Kris, if I were a guy I certainly would not be in this mess LOL - thank you so so much -means a lot to me Linda, I rarely go outside of the box eheheh thank you so much - so sweet angel, what an honor - thank you so much and yes hope - is indeed a great thing Karilea LOL I did thank you! *whew* Thank you scorpio! ahahaha you know K - I put that in there just for you . . . thank you - it was a toughy for sure . . . grrr Bill - you have always said you wanted to see a love poem from me, I guess this is as close as it gets thank you Thanks guys xxoo |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"For here reflected His crest doth shine stained glass deflected two eyes in time What may he bring? This interlope? Upon his chest a glint of H O P E" Gawd...Sue...this is awesome! You really outdid yourself with this one...definitely one of your best. Love it, lady! Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one of your best, for sure...it's in my library! great challenge, we should do that more often (I have not had really any time lately, but hopefully soon) damn, this was enough to make me miss writing even though my life is fairly full right now |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thanks Vicky - twas my own challenge nearly killed me lol Dix - yes, I know been missing you here Thank you guys so so much xxoo |
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