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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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In a life somnambulant visions sometimes come to play not suicidal. no i've grown too strong or is it stubborn? for them to pierce me. yes there are other things escapes escapes behind my eyes there are scratches from where these things claw through i feel them everytime i blink staring blankly at a screen it's 5 am no sleep in site |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Right here with ya, obviously, lol... there was something in this that grabbed me; all I know is it speaks to me. Pepper |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yep, that's just how it feels. Get some rest now.. Sandra |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
somnambulant?? Raph you're using big words and I'm trying to read this to only have my head pound harder...oy...but this was kewl..yeah like it and some stuff..now im back to bed...goodnight errr or good morning?? If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know this...wide awake... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I too, am quite tired. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
sigh. I'm 14 and working my way to becoming an insomniac. isn't that crazy? your words mean a lot to me. sometimes..i go crazy |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks peppermint sorry you couldn't sleep either Sandra you'll be glad to know i slept a whole two hours..yaay. I fell asleep around 7 and woke up at around nine to the sound of a naighbour drilling into the wall..this lasted for oh 3 hours. Somnambulance kris is the act of sleepwalkin.. the poem is deals with both my lack of sleep and sleepwalking through life I know Dixie we've shared many a late nite posting session Kaoru life is bad enough, life without the breather..damn Liz it's the only way to go..crazy seems to make more and more sense in a world like this.. |
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risingphoenix New Member
since 2003-07-01
Posts 8 |
That is interesting, depresion and insomnia together? Odd concotion but one that seems to make sense. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Heh I know this one waaay too well |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks risingpheonix yeah they feed from the same trough thanks skyfire |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know what is ironic . . . I was looking at this exactly when you posted it and just stared at the screen shaking my head thinking the same thoughts |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
i've said it many times great minds think alike and sometimes so do we |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
"I've grown too strong or is it stubborn? for them to pierce me. yes there are other things escapes escapes behind my eyes there are scratches from where these things claw through" __________________________ You've got me shaking my head here in relate. Sometimes I just don't know how to reply to your poetry...you're just too damn good and powerful with your thoughts....but that's a goood thing. Me - speechless? doesn't happen too often yanno  And, as for you using big words?! Of course he does, he's Canadian, baby!...he's a born genius  Ummm, so you must be a woman then?  heheMelissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes . . . you have |
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