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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2003-07-05 01:34 PM

Darkness looms beyond the light
of a struggling heart, as unknown
messengers cast a shadow of fear
upon the wandering mind.

What shield does the messenger
carry to battle the sin of man?
As chains drag the dry of earth
in dusty clouds of shuffling
doom.

Where the trials of one man
are cast away, yet thrown
relentlessly back into the
tearful face.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-05 01:38 PM

good write,,, and a short one from you..

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-07-05 01:39 PM

a very hopeless, empty feeling this one brings to me...that's good though, it makes me feel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2003-07-05 02:40 PM

Darkness looms beyond the light
of a struggling heart, as unknown
messengers cast a shadow of fear
upon the wandering mind.

So true, Barry, so very true....

Hugs

Ethel

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2003-07-05 04:07 PM

Darkness looms beyond the light
of a struggling heart, as unknown
messengers cast a shadow of fear
upon the wandering mind.

Barry, you expressed my feelings here perfectly. My wandering mind haults when the shadow is present... then I struggle.

This is excellent writing, Barry.

Patricia

Janette

Member Elite

since 2001-07-20

Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now

5 posted 2003-07-05 06:10 PM

Frightful thoughts that cause one to think. For me what I fear most is the unknown.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

6 posted 2003-07-05 06:17 PM

damn..great write barry. And endless cycle

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

7 posted 2003-07-05 11:36 PM

The gift to paint a picture of the wound is a treasure to behold. Somehow it lifts from the shoulder, and suspends in the higher atmosphere. TD

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2003-07-20 11:22 AM

May the light of the heavens cast away the darkness of your horizons...

Luvin' hugs,
EA

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

9 posted 2003-07-20 11:29 AM

So ominous, foreboding.
After reading your notice about leaving us soon, I am wondering, are you OK? Are you having surgery? God, I hope you are allright Barry.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

10 posted 2003-07-20 11:39 AM

Leaving? Ohh noo - its not that easy - you cant leave! Oh that will be a sad day indeed . . .
xxoo

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