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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-07-17 05:25 AM


If I were a poet, written thoughts of you
Flowed from pen, red blood ink touched paper
Worlds burst upon pages imaginary delusions.

Wing-breasted angels, downwards looking heavenly eyes
Locked on two shadowy figures, exposed darkness broke
Moonlight attacked cover, rose crumpled brushes
A soiled ground discovered, a night a passion uncovered.

Illusion Dreamt faded, Tears smudge inked pages
World of fantasy written, thoughts of you not spoken
False memory opened, drained dry of all emotion.

Affect mind, infected diseased feverish thoughts of you
Worsened by days, till the point I break, tears emptied
Moment heart Awoken to lies, stopped loving you  

Broken prison scattered parts, corroded fever ended
Breathed air, flowed through veins, freedom spoken
Memories deleted, erased, emptied thoughts of you
Dust held in hands, a last goodbye spoken, image
Flickered memorises released, one last grasp at dreams

  
Only dreams held me, There stayed by my side
You’d make me smile now saddened face
But dreamt lies, don’t hold real you
No taste of lips, no real skin exists
All I touched, dust that drained through grip

The place I dreamt and lost
Wondered if you dreamt a place
Where my fake self walked
And made passionate love under covered dark

The ink flowed dried, the false memory ended
Piled up pens, littered desk, Each contained a memory from mind
And if I could of spared, a pen, Id write that memory over again…


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JaiOfHeaven
Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
1 posted 2003-07-17 05:59 AM


You barrage me with your words.
Can't escape them! lol
Great write...

Jai

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