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anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09
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Menifee, CA

0 posted 2003-07-16 05:15 AM




Under The Old Oak Tree




When I was bold and young and free
And life was in its infancy,
To the hills over yonder
I’d play and wander
And rest weary…Under the old oak tree.

When I reached the age of frivolity,
A restless spirit dwelt in me.
To the hills over yonder,
I went to ponder
And found wisdom…Under the old oak tree.

When I reached the age of maturity
Life’s troubles came endlessly;
To the hills over yonder
I went to surrender
But found solace…Under the old oak tree.

Now I’m no longer young and free
And life’s end I clearly see
To the hills over yonder
Once more I’ll wander
To lie content…Under the old oak tree.




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Jeremiah Johnson
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1 posted 2003-07-16 09:04 AM


how true. even though we grow and change some things always seem to remain a constant in our lives. i love this poem and i hope to see plenty more like it.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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2 posted 2003-07-16 09:36 AM


Written with heart..the heart of an oak tree...well done..

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-16 10:34 AM


This is beautiful, Anwaar. I enjoyed
reading it very much. Oak trees are my favorite trees.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Soleil Noir
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since 2001-12-19
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4 posted 2003-07-16 10:45 AM



We all have a special place
and when we recognize it for
it's magic
I swear we've found a bit of heaven.

anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09
Posts 181
Menifee, CA
5 posted 2003-07-17 12:16 PM


Thank you everyone for taking the time to read...appreciate you comments.
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