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El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA

0 posted 2003-07-14 06:27 PM


Life is a spiral staircase,
Which ascends up towards the sky—
Every day we take a step,
Learning more as time goes by.

Sometimes I want to sit down,
And not go any higher!
But always a helping hand
Has come to bless and inspire...

But this staircase has no rails!
There’s nothing to hold on to!
Could there be a guiding hand—
Lord, am I to hold to you?

There are tears in my eyes
As I’ve come to realize
The step I must take today,
Has to take me far away—

And my friend, it divides us,
I must say goodbye for now—
But, my friend, I’ll be around,
Though my hand is to the plow,

I’ll see you on a higher step,
When God binds us once again,
If not here on earth someday,
Then in the New Jerusalem!

© Copyright 2003 Benjamin Graber - All Rights Reserved
x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08
Posts 130
California, USA
1 posted 2003-07-14 06:29 PM


sometimes i think about life like you described...but i always felt a step back was a moment when i was falling back...i try to think of any step I take as a step towards self discovery..

good write

Mike

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-15 10:17 AM


Enjoyed your thoughts...I usually think of life as taking a journey on a path...and sometimes we walk on the right path and sometimes we get on the wrong path...and sometimes we come to a junction and these are times of choices and hopefully we'll make the right choice...James
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

3 posted 2003-07-16 12:25 PM


For some reason, Jacob's Ladder came to mind when I read your poem.  I enjoyed your words.
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-07-16 10:27 PM


enjoyed this write very much,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
5 posted 2003-07-17 12:17 PM


Life...
A journey untold until you experience
the moment
the time
the thought
the feeling
the sight
the touch
the notion
the clearing of everything around till your sound with yourself

The whole galaxy around you..and you the center..not me..but you.
The created deserving of the creator's love..constantly seeking him.

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