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babygurl55
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since 2003-05-28
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0 posted 2003-07-14 10:02 PM



Lost in a world of confusion
Every turn leads to darkness
No where to run
Have no place to get away

Reality is too demanding
To much for such a fogy mind to handle
Feels dead to the world
Wondering with a lost soul

Sitting in sedation
Wondering what to do next
Heart breaking with every breath
Tears swell and flow like a river

Mind is racing wildly
Cannot think anymore
Finally quits and gives away
To a night full of better things
The things of a dream


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VOE
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
1 posted 2003-07-15 05:16 AM


Oh, yes...sometimes it is so much easier at night, to dream.  This is describing things that are no stranger to most of us here, and it is written very well, my friend!  I read, and I understand....

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-07-15 06:18 PM


Yes, we can set the mood with our minds...james
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