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Ivy Rose
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0 posted 2003-07-11 12:48 PM


(Inspired by BC's "In Devil's Moonlight")


There is a devil in your moonlight
whispering his ways of passion
that only few will ever know.
Hear his laughter steal away your soul...
imp that hides in your heart's misty, moors.
He rises on the Face of the Moon
waving out his beams of light,
causing them to rain upon your heart.

Can't you hear his laughter in the mists
of a sultry, Moon-filled night?

Can't you hear those notes of love
rising out of his sterling stars?

Listen for the Moon devil
who lives inside your moonlight,
who beckons you to dance upon
his waves of opalescent desire
which have crested in the regions
of the soul, have splashed against
the piles of mischief erected
on the sea of your Moon-beamed soul.

[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (07-11-2003 01:25 AM).]

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ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-07-11 12:51 PM


colorful imagination...enjoyed the devil..moon link


Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-07-11 01:14 AM


Smiling at this, and BC will no doubt grin from ear-to-ear in devilish pleasure.
QjQ
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3 posted 2003-07-11 01:20 AM


Can't you hear those notes of love
rising out of his sterling stars?

these lines bring a serenade to the poetry...   terrific write....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-11 01:27 AM


The devil cannot catch a moon-beamed soul!

Fun read!

Sweet dreams!
EA


passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-11 02:38 AM


just wonderful!
Bill Charles
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6 posted 2003-07-11 09:39 AM


Ivy Rose - I'm grinning, from ear to ear in moonlight of a devil's night...

BC

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