Dead Leaves Below My Feet - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #27

Dead Leaves Below My Feet

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-09 03:55 PM

I crush
   dead leaves
below
my   feet
When I
am leaving
you.
I find heart in
another  part of
my complex
universe
and I
no longer
care,
if you want to
lock me out of
your heart..
For I
never yearned to be there
to begin
    with.
I crush dead
leaves
below
my feet when
I am leaving
you.

wild irish
Junior Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 31

1 posted 2003-07-09 03:57 PM

very good www.rateapoet.com

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-07-09 04:56 PM

Meghan, oh do i know this. Strong stuff here, the crusing dead leaves when you leave, wonderful expression. lets leave and not look back. deal?

much love, gem xx

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-07-09 05:03 PM

You're free! Don't look back! May only the leaves be crushed!

Loving hugs,
EA

[This message has been edited by Earth Angel (07-09-2003 10:18 PM).]

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-09 08:20 PM

Great poem. I liked the way you expressed yourself.

keep on writting more poems.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-07-09 08:29 PM

That crunching sound can be comforting, can't it?

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-07-09 09:57 PM

the leaves can be recycled at least into another season

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.