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RavenEye
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0 posted 2003-07-09 02:15 AM


On the crest
of misery's moon
awaits
today's mourning.

Solitude's
anxious anger
is illuminated by
a harvest glow.

Shades and shadows
hide profound sorrows
of yesterday's tomorrow
as wicked winds carry them
to unknonwn destinations.

On the ridge
of ocean's ebb,
breathes and dies
the essence of all life.

In frantic fury
waves dance, clash,
crash and thrash,
only to fade into
the watery abyss.

Waiitng in isolation
at the edge of dawn,
is the rising
of a new day
ready to be born.

Only to be betrayed
by the harsh arrival
of another evening
stalking in to steal
yet another birth
of yet another day.

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

© Copyright 2003 Lisa Arnold - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-07-09 04:06 AM


made me feel kinda sad...good write
RavenEye
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2 posted 2003-07-09 04:44 AM


Hello,

I am sorry it made you feel a little sad. Thanks so much for writing and commenting on my poem. It means a great deal to hear from others!!

RavenEye

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-07-10 05:03 PM


I enjoyed this, Lisa. Sorry I missed it the day it was posted!

This stands out in my mind:

Shades and shadows
hide profound sorrows
of yesterday's tomorrow
as wicked winds carry them
to unknown destinations

RavenEye
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since 2003-05-02
Posts 29
Ohio, USA
4 posted 2003-07-11 02:09 AM


Hi Midnitesun,

I am so pleased you liked my poem!! That's okay you missed it the day it was posted. I appreciate you taking the time to commenton it now.

My best to you!!

~Lisa~

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

Munda
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5 posted 2003-07-11 02:11 PM


I really enjoyed your poem! Wonderful write.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2003-07-11 02:23 PM


Well, you are certainly a welcome new addition to our poetic family! This poem was deliciously descriptive--and very poetic! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and appreciate your talent!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel


RavenEye
Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29
Ohio, USA
7 posted 2003-07-11 03:12 PM


Hi Munda,

Thank you so much!! I am so happy you liked my poem!!

~Lisa~

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

RavenEye
Junior Member
since 2003-05-02
Posts 29
Ohio, USA
8 posted 2003-07-11 03:14 PM


Hi Earth Angel,

WOW!! Thank you for your wonderful comments and warm welcome!! I deeply appreciate it!!

~Lisa~

Keep faith, hold your dreams in your palm of your hand as you reach for your goals!

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